Drabble: Elementary

[patolozka]

Title: Elementary

Fandom: Harry Potter, snarry

Author: Patolozka

Beta-read: Suite Samba

Word Count: 200

Challenge: Written for snarry100 prompt 399: Enough

Rating(s): M

Disclamer: Don't own the characters. No profit is being made from this story.

Summary: There was a moment in the Final Battle when Severus thought he could die. Harry Potter didn´t think so...

A/N: Sorry, I´m a bit out of inspiration, so it´s silly I fear...

 

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“You are a dead man!” Voldemort yelled furiously and trained his Elder wand on him.

“Dead man,” Severus echoed contemplatively, slowly testing the words on his tongue, and then turning around to face the Dark Lord. “I was a dead man all these years, my lord,” he answered calmly as if they were just speaking about the weather outside.

Voldemort´s red eyes widened with impudence. “I´ll kill you, traitor!”

“I know...” Severus looked dismissively on his snake-like form and waited for the end.

And then... someone moved in front of him, someone gently touched his arm and obstructed his view of the Dark Lord. A man with black hair sticking out in all directions, with wide shoulders and straight back, with green eyes so often glowing with passion, but now as cold as ice. Harry Potter, the boy no more...

“Enough!” he exclaimed clearly, his wand firmly in his right hand. “Severus is mine and what is mine I´ll keep.”

Severus could see it now - there was the saviour of the wizarding world standing in front of him. And in that simple moment he realized that Tom Riddle’s days were numbered.

Because Harry had his Severus and Severus had... Harry.

 

Comments

1!

[keyairreem]

Brilliant! Love love love! More please!\

PS Sorry to hear that you are felling frustrated. Hopefully you will feel better later!

Re: 1!

[patolozka]

Oh, don´t worry about that;-) And thank you for your comment - it made me smile!

[teryarel]

Wow, if this is uninspired... ^^
I really loved it: How Severus calmly looked death in the eyes, and how Harry defied death for what belongs to him.

[patolozka]

Oh, thank you very much! It´s... you know... I - from all authors - can´t decide if the tale is good or bad and eveytime I try to do it I fail... It´s the blindness of author;-)

[alisanne]

Aww! I love how possessive Harry is here. Severus is his and he's going to stay his. *nods firmly*
All is well. ;)
Nice job!

[patolozka]

Yes, I like possessive Harry and possessive Severus too;-) But here is the Harry´s turn;-) Thank you very much!

[mrs_sweetpeach]

Nice! Not silly either, if you ask me.

[patolozka]

Oh, thank you;-)

[dracdauter]

I love how cool, calm and collected Severus is facing ole snake face and I love a possessive Harry.

I like when you are uninspired. :D

[patolozka]

Oh, my inspiration lasts still but now it´s more tired unispiration;-) I´ll try. Thank you very much!

[adafrog]

Good.

[patolozka]

Thank you!

[sheankelor]

*laughs* Yeah, that is how it is how it should have worked. Thanks for a wonderful tale!
Ree

[patolozka]

Yes, it is;-) Thank you for a nice comment!