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patolozkaTitle: New Home
Author: Patolozka
Word Count: 100
Beta-read: Jimmi (Slovak), Accioslash
Rating(s): G
Challenge: Written for snarry100 prompt 383: Under the Stars.
Warning(s): None
Disclamer: Don't own the characters. No profit is being made from this story.
A/N: Only a kind of romance…
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They were lying in their bed; the heavy dark blue curtains were opened, only two spiral columns blocked their view of the glowing fireplace. Severus´s fingers were lazily playing with his husband´s hair. Harry was nearly dropping off. He was exhausted after the full day even though their new house welcomed them fondly. He was grateful that they were wizards. Moving had to be terrible for Muggles. He sighed. Severus turned his head and looked at him.
“I feel so good under the stars...”
“You mean – under the canopied bed,” Harry objected.
“No, under the stars... in your eyes.”
A/N2: In Czech canopied bed means bed with heaven (literally), so I don´t know if it´s clear... It was a momentary idea.
Excellent!
Date: 2013-08-13 03:52 pm (UTC)Using the Czech concept of a canopied bed as a 'bed with heaven' is a perfect use of this prompt, and a great way to teach us about your culture!
Thanks for all your contributions to the fandom ~ I'm an English speaker and I am too scared to post any of my useless attempts to write fic ~ I really enjoy yur work!
*hugs you*
Re: Excellent!
Date: 2013-08-13 04:09 pm (UTC)Thank you! I am glad that you like it:-)
Re: Excellent!
Date: 2013-08-13 04:28 pm (UTC)You are right that practicing helps. I am really pleased that you are part of the Snarry fandom ~ and I think Severus and Harry would agree!
My compliments to you for all your fine work and continued efforts. Please share more of the Czech culture with us through your work!
Your English is really excellent considering all you must have learned to be so proficient. I could never learn Czech! I looked at your LJ page in Czech and was totally baffled! So I have a lot of respect for you as an author in English.
Keep writing!
Re: Excellent!
Date: 2013-08-13 05:04 pm (UTC)Thank you for your support I appreciate it a lot!
Yes I have been planning to share more but I am waiting for beta-reading:-) I have 3 more stories in my drawer and I am trying to write for snarry100 prompts every week:-)
Could I ask you for something? I know that it is impertinent but I need to check my first four posted drabbles. I am ashamed by it... Could you?
I would by really grateful!
Paw
Pat.
Re: drabbles
Date: 2013-08-13 05:51 pm (UTC)Please tell me where to find them ~ the ones you want me to read over.
What are the titles and what would you like me to look at? Spelling, grammar?
I have time right now, so please let me know how I can help you!
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Date: 2013-08-14 11:50 am (UTC)And English is everywhere. I would like to manage French as well, but I have no time for it, even though I had it for 5 years at school. But it was before university and 8 years of different udecation are 8 years, you know...
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