Pink

Jul. 19th, 2013 09:45 pm
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Title: Pink

Author: Patolozka

Word Count: 100

Beta-read: suzanne_scot_girl_012

Rating(s): G

Challenge: Written for snarry100 prompt 380: Suntan.

Warning(s): None

Disclamer: Don't own the characters. No profit is being made from this story.

A/N: This is my first drabble written in English because I am Czech. But today we started our own HP prompt page, so I said to myself: You can translate, but you can´t write, really? Maybe no, but I hope yes. For pekeleke who was so kind to me and forced me (gently) to do it, thanks a lot!

Summary: Harry and Severus on the beach…

Pink

 

ooOoo

“Severus, are you OK?“

“Yes!“

“Do you want something to drink?“

“No.“

“Swim? Play volleyball? Ice cream?“

“No, you impossible brat, let me be!“

“Severus…?“

“NO!“

Do you want me to help you put on sunscreen, because otherwise…“

„What is your main problem, Potter? Lack of interest? Increased libido? Decreased function of brain? YOUR. HELP. IS. NOT. NECESSARY! You idiotic overgrown child!“

„As you wish. But…“

„But?!“

„I hope you like bright pink colour, Sev, because if you don´t let me do it for you, your skin will be…“

„Pink?“

„…Yeah.“

„Great, that´s exactly what I wanted!“

 


Date: 2013-07-19 08:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] soleo
Welcome! and thank you for sharing!
aww and I hope soon Severus will be able to accept Harry's help with the lotion.

Date: 2013-07-19 10:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pekeleke
OMG! You really did it! You've posted a drabble of your own here and now you've become officially one of us! Welcome to snarry_100, Pat! :D

Now that I've got that much off my chest let me thank you for so generously dedicating your first ever English drabble to me. That's a beautiful honour indeed and I'll treasure the gesture forever. I know exactly how nerve-wracking writing in a language that's not your own mother tongue feels, since I am Spanish by birth and it took me a long time to gather enough courage to decide that I could write in English too.

Now onto your drabble... I loved how you played with this idea of a very disgruntled Severus being annoyed to death by an eager Harry who's constantly wanting to pamper him... Poor Severus! And Poor Harry!... the best part of it is that Harry is going to win their battle of wills regardless of whether Sev allows him to put that oil on him or not. If he gets too pink and ends up burnt, he'll need Harry's help to spread moisturizing cream on his back anyway...! :D

All in all this piece was both wonderfully funny and perfect for the prompt at hand. It made me grin like mad. Well done, Pat. Well done indeed.

Date: 2013-07-20 12:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lilyseyes
Yay! Well-done! :)

Date: 2013-07-20 02:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] alisanne
Ahahaha! Poor Severus. *pats him gently*
Maybe next time he'll listen to Harry? Yeah, maybe not. *g*
And welcome! I'll add a name tag for you at the community. :)

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